Sample LOR for MS in Computational Finance

Following is a sample Letter of Recommendation for MS in Computational Finance:
This is a recommendation supporting the application of ___________, currently pursuing her Final Year Bachelor’s degree in Electronics at ______________ College. As the principal of this institution, I would like to point out that she has made a mark for herself, in not only academics but extra-curricular activities too. I would be honored to elucidate a few aspects that would make her a welcome and worthwhile addition to your university.
Her academic performance has been commendable. In her first year examinations, she brought laurels to the college by standing second in the University of Mumbai out of around ten thousand students. She has been a consistent performer in the following years as well. At the outset of writing this letter, I sought the feedback of some of her professors. It is my understanding, that she has an excellent rapport with all the faculty members. She has the ability to understand deep-rooted concepts and
advanced courses with equal ease. She has also added to her technical knowledge by being a member of student chapters like Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE), Association for Computer Machinery (ACM) and Institute of Electronics and Telecommunication Engineers.
Apart from academic excellence, she has been a valuable asset to the Students Council of the college. In the capacity of its member for two consecutive years, she has been a regular at all the meetings and provided valuable suggestions when it came to taking various important decisions for the functioning of the college and addressing issues. As a member of the student council, she has been an integral part of decisions like resource management and budget allocation for college festivals. This responsibility has added to her skill set. She has excellent communication skills which are substantiated by the fact that she has participated in group discussions, debates and elocution competitions at intra and inter college level. Her work as the member of the college editorial board followed by the Secretary in the following year has been commendable and appreciated by the management, faculty and students alike.
It is my understanding that she intends to pursue a Masters degree in Computational Finance in your institution. I strongly believe that her diverse skill set coupled with her academic brilliance will make her a suitable candidate for your graduate program. With her sincerity, relentless hard work and perseverance, she is sure to achieve her career goals as a part of your university. I wish her all the best for the future. Please feel free to contact me for any further inquiry.
Sincerely,
Name
(Principal)
College